作文在考试中分值是非常大的,在写作文中主要的就是点睛之笔,我们可以用一些名言,或者典型的句子使文章清晰明了。
要学会套格式:首先,同学们都有必要看看作文参考范文。
一方面可以掌握书信的写作格式,实在不懂写内容,但是开头的称呼Dear ~~( Tom ,Li Ming),结尾的落款Yours~ ( Tom ,Li Ming)这些基本格式总要写上去,写作格式正确也会得几分,记着我们的目标是能得一分是一分。
另一方面看看范文可以找点感觉,不是要背句子,而是看看作文的写作思路。
请记住以下四个写信常用的句子:
I’ve got good news for you.
我有好消息要告诉你。(一般用在开头第一句)
You are welcome to visit my home / Guilin anytime.
欢迎随时来我家/ 来桂林玩。(一般用于文末)
If you can join us ,please give me a reply soon.
如果你参加,请尽快回复我。
I’m looking forward to your reply.
期待你的回复。(一般用于文末)
范文一
假定你是Jack,给在无锡新区工作的笔友王强写信,要点如下:,
1. 非常高兴得知王强在准备高考,並鼓励他一定能克服各种困难取得好成绩。
2. 告诉他你将去无锡旅游,你将乘火车于5月1日早晨6点到达,请他接站,并请他帮你安排1至4日的住宿(旅馆最好靠近市中心,房间可以小一些,但不要太贵)。
3. 此外,你还要他帮你订5日返回上海的火车票。
Dear Wang Qiang,
I'm glad to learn that you are busy preparing for college entrance exams. Where there is a strong will, there is a success. I am sure that you will overcome all kinds of difficulties in your study
I'm planning to go to Wuxi and look around in the city for a few days. I'll take the train and arrive at 6 o'clock a.m. on May 1st. Will you please come and meet me at the station? I'm going to stay in Wuxi till May 4th. Please help me book a hotel room. I hope to stay in a hotel around the downtown area but the price shouldn't be very high. I don't mind if the room is small. Another thing. Can you book a ticket for me back to Shanghai on 4th?
All the best,
Jack
范文二
S城的交通拥挤现象日趋严重,事故时有发生,特别是在早晚上、下班高峰期。市政府决定采取措施改善交通现状,向广大市民征集建议。请根据下面的要点向市政府提出建议。
(1)修缮公路,改善路面状况;
(2)修筑立交桥,缓解交通阻塞现象;
(3)控制小轿车的产量。
要求:短文需要涉及上述所有内容,可以适当增加内容,阐述自己的其他想法。
As everybody knows that the traffic problems in ourcity become more and more serious. During the rush-hours every morning and afternoon, the roads are verycrowded. There are traffic jams almost on every mainroad. The accident rate becomes higher than before. Ithink that it is high time for the city government to takesome measures to solve this problem.
First of all, we should repair the roads, for some ofthe roads are in bad condition and it is difficult for thedrivers to go through. Secondly, we should build more overpasses so as to cut down traffic jams. Thirdly,the pro-duction of cars should be controlled, for there are toomany cars moving on the roads every day. As long as wedo something like this, the traffic problem will be solvedor at least the accident rate will be lowered. I do hope ourgovernment will accept my suggestions.